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PostSubject: Alone Once More: by Rose   Mon Feb 16, 2009 6:52 pm

Explination:
A poem I wrote from Bella's piont of view, set During New Moon.
It describes how she felt after Edward left her.

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Alone Once More

I cried out for you the day you left.
You could never understand how I felt then.
I shed many, bitter tears for you.

That day I awoke to find you missing
My mind filled with an overwhelming sorrow,
a numbness that took me over.

I found it so hard to breathe my dear
You took everything away, emptiness inside.
That was all that remained of my heart.

It was a pain I could never feel completely
And yet it would not fade away.
A wound so deep it was untouchable.

My soul longed for you, as it still does.
you could never be replaced in my mind
yet I know you will never return.

Now you know how depressed I feel.
I was a cracked mirror, just waiting to break.
it was hard to hold the pieces together.

So now I am dying on the inside
now that my heart has shut down forever
now that you have abandoned me.

Now im Alone.....Once More.

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Hope you liked it! please Review/comment! xx
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PostSubject: Re: Alone Once More: by Rose   Tue Feb 17, 2009 8:37 pm

-tears up- Oh wow. Did you mean to make me want to cry?! THAT WAS GREAT.

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PostSubject: Re: Alone Once More: by Rose   Wed Feb 18, 2009 2:54 pm

*huggles* aww Moodzies-kins! no I didnt mean to make you cry!
But im glad you liked it! I just think thats how Bella felt...

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PostSubject: Re: Alone Once More: by Rose   Wed Feb 18, 2009 8:43 pm

-tear- It. is. wonderful. -tear-

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